Tesa - Blind Spot II
BLIND SPOT 1
The loud bang of the door
against the brick wall startled the sturdy man standing over a small heap on
the dry grass covered floor. He whirled round in time to behold the scantily dressed
woman in the doorway.
The dull light in the barn highlighted her contorted
face and blood shot eyes. She was out of breath and her heaving chest clung to her
extra large, transparent night shirt which flapped out in the night breeze like
broken wings. Then he saw the gun.
She found fathers gun! An alarm was set off in his head. The thought sent cold shivers
down his spine as he stared helplessly at the woman he had known all his life. She
aimed his father’s parting gift at him. Ted threw his hands up in the
air and slowly backed away from the ferocious woman by the door while avoiding
the quiet heap at his feet.
"I warned you. You swore
never to hurt her again!"
Her words were fierce and dripped
of acid. He was guilty as charged, the old gun was out and nothing would change
her mind, not even his usual appeal to her maternal love. It was his entire
fault. He had killed her love for him, had broken all his vows and made her
reunite with her vicious past. Ted knew he had come to the end of the road.
As the cold air streaming in through
the shattered door ruffled his thorn shirt, he heard a click sound and knew the
safety was off. His knees buckled beneath him. She had been his passage into
this miserable life and she would be his cold way out of it. A muffled sob escaped
from the heap on the grass covered floor and he knew little Tesa was not dead after
all. His hope rose, the woman removed the safety lock of the old gun.
"Mah forgive me! But the child lives..."
"I’m sorry son."
Without a moment’s hesitation,
she pulled the trigger...
Nikky the first part got me confused. i didn't know where u were headed with the gun and barn. i even thought she was going to kill a wild animal. lol
ReplyDeletebut this second part nailed it. i love the way you write. i am sticking around for more
So thats Tesa s mum. No wonder d gal get mean mind.
ReplyDeleteNk Nawa o. Dis story is scary. Did she kill him?
Amara welcome aboard. Please tighten your seat belt.
ReplyDelete@ Okey, scary? lol! SticK around for more